My rough draft was a bit unclear as to what my argument entailed. Readers wouldn't find out what exactly I was arguing until about halfway. Also, my choice of words did affect the comprehensibility of a lot of the points i was making.
In my final draft, I designed a matrix template that helped me to better organize my topics in a way that related to my thesis overall without straying from the point. By following my outline I was able to focus on each topic with clarity without any worry of straying from my argument.
The main difference wasn't really the thesis or anything major. I just needed to reorganize my ideas into a way that created a narrative for my argument. I also took into account with more focus on eliminating as much as possible any refuting counter arguments. I also built my own counter argument a bit stronger so that my refutation had a better effect on fortifying my thesis.
Overall I feel my final draft is a much better and clearer representation of what I was trying to argue.
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